What’s wrong with these three statements?

upon entering the community, a prolific garden caught my attention.

this mix of 35 glitter and shiny berries give your arrangements texture and offer a wintry take on traditional christmas colors.

this sleek and durable multitool includes a bottle opener, screw driver, ruler, standard blade, and serrated blade.

With the first statement there is no need for a comma. With statement 2 too many and's are in the statement remove the first replace it with a comma. Do the same for statement 3

d. murder of a son and cooking the son for a feast

procne murdered her son and served him to tereus, her husband and her son's father. she did this out of revenge. tereus raped her sister, philomela, and cut her tongue out to keep her from talking. philomela managed to communicate it to procne and procne sought revenge.

tantalus murdered his son and fed him to the gods because he was angry with the gods. the gods punished him by putting him in a pool of water that evaporates when he tries to drink and having fruit hang just out of his reach.

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.