Commander mckee checked the dials and switches in the shuttle cockpit and determined that they were functioning
normally. he then tested the communications systems that connected his ship with the mission control headquarters. he
checked the fuel gauges and saw that there was enough fuel for the months-long trip to saturn. all of the other gauges and
meters checked out normal, and the idling engines gave off a strong, reassuring hum. after a final glance around, mckee
declared that the shuttle was finally ready for takeoff. he readied the brave astronauts under his command and the ground
crew alertly awaiting the launch. the rocket took off and, racing through space, eventually arrived at saturn, where
commander mckee and his assistants built the first successful human colony.
126 words, 9.8 flesch, 1180 lexile
how could a change in emphasis best develop the events in this passage, making for a more interesting and exciting read?

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .

that is true because that is something they fulfill for their work.

working in public administration clerical support,what might one of your jobs be?

clerical work generally involves day-to-day office tasks, such as answering phones and entering data into spreadsheets. these tasks may be performed by secretaries, office clerks and administrative assistants. other duties traditionally associated with clerical work include: word processing and typing.

answer is a.returning items from customers that they did not find worth their money or b.collecting money from people with speeding tickets and filing the information

explanation:

b. collecting money from people with speeding tickets and filing the information is the correct answer choice

the speaker versus the boy.