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(1) school involvement in community
service drastically increases teen
participation. (2) according to the
corporation for national and community
service, by 1999, 83% of high schools held
community service activities. (3) the same
study states that teen volunteering rates
doubled between 1989 and 2005. (4)
today, teen involvement is mostly
episodic, meaning that although teen
involvement in community service is
increasing, today's teens prefer shorter
obligations. (5) although the high school
requirement of one hundred hours seems
where would you add the following sentence, and
why? this suggests that an increase in school
service programs increases teen interest and
participation overall
after the last sentence as a conclusion
after sentence 3, to link evidence and claim
in the first sentence to add a claim
after sentence 2, as a transition
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