Daily Edit #11 The paragraph below tells about a special date in October history. Can you find and mark ten
errors in the paragraph? Look for errors of capitalization, punctuation, spelling, and
grammar
The first successful launch off a man-made satellite happened on October
4, 1957, That satellite, launched by the Soviet Union was named Sputnik I. The
launch caused a renewed emphesis on the teaching of science in america. The
satellite, which weighed 184 pound took off from the soviets' Tyuratam launch
site. Though it was active for just 21 days, Sputnik I mark the beginning of the
Space Age and exploration beyond planet earth.

Marking Ten (10) Errors of Capitalization, Punctuation, Spelling, and Grammar in the paragraph:

1. off... in launch off instead of ...in launch of ...

2. A comma instead of a full-stop after 1957.

3. Omission of a comma after ...Union (That satellite, launched by the Soviet Union, was named Sputnik I).

4. science should be in the plural form "sciences."

5. The use of lower case of 'a' in America.

6. emphasis and not emphesis.

7. Non-capitalization of soviets', launch, and site.  Should have read: "...the Soviet's Tyuratam Launch Site.

8. "mark" should be in the past tense (marked).

9. "Exploration" instead of exploration (with 'e' capitalized).

10. The apostrophe after soviets' should be before 's' as in "Soviet's."

Explanation:

The above corrections were made to put the sentences in their correct grammatical expressions.

not concrete, existing in thought or as an idea but not having a physical or concrete existence

imparadis't in one anothers arms  

the happier eden, shall enjoy their fill  

of bliss on bliss, while i to hell am thrust,  

where neither joy nor love, but fierce desire,  

among our other torments not the least,  

still unfulfill'd with pain of longing pines;  

yet let me not forget what i have gain'd  

from their own mouths; all is not theirs it seems:  

one fatal tree there stands of knowledge call'd,  

forbidden them to taste: knowledge forbidd'n?  

suspicious, reasonless. why should their lord  

envie them that? can it be sin to know,