Hi i just need someone to check my work. I did an assignment on English Language paper 2 question Q2. I got some feedback from my teacher but i don't really understand them. for the highlighted sentence she said it was unclear?
also she gave me an ebi of what i should do better next time. can you like explain it to me and also help me of how i can apply this to my work to improve it?
thx

you said "and and"

the correct answer is c. he speculates on what might happen at given points in the future in a world without people. alan h. weisman is an american author, professor, and journalist. authors organize their information with a purpose. they present their ideas in an organized way. this is called text structure. weisman uses text structure so as to improve overall comprehension and to prove his points.

different strategies reach different people based on their ability to understand the material. (from personal experience) when writing an argumentative essay write explaining the subject as though your audience never heard of it before and it is just being introduced, then explain why other people hate it also, afterward you would explain why that would be wrong. i hope that : )