Rewrite the following two paragraphs . Use a variety of FIVE iSPACED techniques to improve the piece of writing: The road was calm but eerily quiet. There were no sounds in the distance and not even a breeze in the air. The house next to the road was also still and stood solemnly adjacent to it. The door to the house was enormous and made of an ancient-looking timber that was rotting and splintering before me. The handle to the door was rusting and of a reddy-brown colour. It was very uninviting.

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Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.