Tony Stark wanted a flock of backyard chickens but, there was no good place in his yard for them to live. is this sentence correct. Are there supposed to be no commas?

In the poem "barbara frietchie," what caused a shade of sadness to come over jackson? o barbara displayed the rebel flag for jackson's men to see. jackson ordered his soldiers to fire on the flag in the attic. barbara asked jackson's men to aim toward her, not the flag. jackson remembered that he was riding toward a battle.