The document will Read the passage, which lacks vivid description, strong imagery, and dialogue. Then rewrite
the passage to include description and dialogue in a way that shows Denise is relieved and
joyful.
Passage
Just as the final school bell rang, Ms. Smithers handed Denise the math test. Denise
turned away and flipped it over to reveal the grade, and then she stepped out into
the hallway and closed the door. She felt happy. Denise walked down the school
hallway and out into the afternoon where her mother
was waiting. Denise showed her the test, and her mother was happy too.

Read this excerpt from loom and spindle. one of the first strikes of cotton-factory operatives that ever took place in this country was that in lowell, in october, 1836. when it was announced that the wages were to be cut down, great indignation was felt, and it was decided to strike, en masse. this was done. the mills were shut down, and the girls went in procession from their several corporations to the "grove" on chapel hill, and listened to "incendiary" speeches from early labor reformers. what can be inferred about the time period of the excerpt? check all that apply. a. factory workers felt frustrated by the lowering of their wages. b. workers were willing to show their displeasure through strikes. c. early efforts at strikes became chaotic and violent. d. the lowell girls were forbidden to voice objections. e. the lowell strike was followed by other labor strikes.