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MARKING BRAINLIEST: QUESTION ABOUT DIALOGUE : Ok so i'm writing a memoir from the first time I smoked for my AP LANG class. I just need someone to tell me if my punctuation and dialogue are all good. If my dialogue isn't, could you tell me where I messed up and how to fix it? (if some swear words look weird its cuz i had to change them so would let me post this)

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Everyone was looking at me, waiting expectantly for me to smoke it. "Ayo imma have to pass on this one. I'm just not the smoker type," I said with a nervous laugh. "That's cap," one of the guys yelled across the circle. Josh looked at me with a sideways stare while all the guys began egging me to take just one hit. To my left, AJ, a kid I've only met a few times, started taunting me until I began to feel butterflies creep up again. "My guy, just take the hit. You got all these fine ahh females around, and you're making yourself look like a bussy every second you waste," he said. Tyler, another junior, chimed in and said, "Naw, he's just after Emma they've been practically on top of one another. Ain't that Jabreel?"

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