I need to see if this story will pass my class but I need opinions lol so Here it is Treacherous Rains

Seth and Jacob are recent College graduates who set a plan to go on a 2-3 month hiking trip together in Tennessee, their first real trip as a couple, on the Appalachian Mtn. They were going on a walk at a rest area along the trail, to see if it was a good spot to hunker down for the night, they had to drive hours to get to the trailhead and only made it a couple of hours inward, but found a place to set up camp.

As they walked, Seth found a way to wander off the marked trail probably following a butterfly or getting firewood, and the long-time camper Jacob went off to find him. as he went off the trail he saw that some of the leaves and sticks were broke and smashed down, so he followed the recently made trail, thinking it was Seth and he got to a lump on the ground thinking it was him he was wrong Seth was hovering frozen in the thought of fear, over the body laying on the ground with a trail of blood behind the victim. Jacob looked at his face and realized who he was... he was his ex, Kyler Hemming, 1 year younger than himself.

He had a flashback of a few years ago. In the second year of Med training, Kyler was his study group partner and hung out a lot at his dorm, a few short weeks later Kyler had confessed his feelings and Jacob was about to when Kyler spoke up. They dated for about 3 years, and it was Jacobs last year in training, they got into an argument about where to live when Jacob graduated without his beloved with him. It had gotten so stressful and harmful that they decided it was better to move on without each other.

¨Hey who knows that out of all places in the world I run into my once loved ex laying in the woods with the backpack that I once gave him¨

As he came back to reality, he had noticed that Seth had been crying, and his eyes were puffy and red, as he looked up, Seth began to speak. ¨ I know this guy, his name is Kyler Hemming if I remember correctly, he went to my middle and high school, he was super popular, but I knew a secret that no-one else knew, I knew that he fell in love with guys.¨

As he finished up his short-lived story, they both heard the distant crash of thunder against the strong gusts of wind and saw the dark and hazy clouds rolling in, with no service, and the sunset fading in the distance looks to be as if they are trapped with a dead body on a mountain.

With the storm rolling in fast, The hikers weighed their options. Seth: ¨ where should we go? Back to camp. wherever that is, or stay here with whatever Kyler had at his campsite?¨ Jacob ¨ We should stay here since Camp is wherever in the woods that is and we have to stay with him, we can't just leave him.¨ Seth detected sadness in his voice not knowing why.

Well after a big discussion they went to try to find the camp and came across the creek that was ankle-deep on the way there is now a raging river that seemed to be above their heads. They turned around and were forced to stay at the seemed to be a recently abandoned campsite, assuming it was Kylers´.

On the way back from the creek hunt, they found out the hard way that rock can get slick real fast when wet, they finally got back to the makeshift camp and heard a low groan from where the body was left. They grew conscious of their surroundings when they heard the groan again. They checked where the body was supposed to be and there was nothing there except for smeared blood on leaves they looked around and found the still handsome Kyler, sitting against the rock beside of the what was the fire. Groaning from what looked like long slices from a rugged edge. Jacob was the first to spot Kyler through the rain and he nearly jumped out of his skin and Seth just about had a heart attack

The storm cleared in the early morning and they had to leave as soon as possible, to find Kyler the help he needed, as they gathered the food, they heard distant yelling from what seemed to be the on duty park ranger, to check if everyone is ok and well. They started to yell and Park Rangers arrived, now with some extra sets of hands the climb back down was easier then expected, and Kyler got the help that he needed.