Can someone please edit this one paragraph that got a grade of 1 get a grade of 2 Ghandi’s non-violent personality is a rhetorical device all unto itself. It makes him look far more approachable to the receiver of the letter. One example starts on line 64. Ghandi states, “If you think that there is any substance in my letter, and if you will care to discuss matters with me, and if to that end you would like me to postpone publication of this letter, I shall gladly refrain on receipt of a telegram to that effect soon after this reaches you.” Ghandhi doesn’t threaten the British government, he offers to not publish the letter so that they can sit down and have a civil talk about it. On top of that, he has it hand-delivered by an English friend. He is definitely far more inviting than the Americans were in their Declaration of Independence.

Ghandi’s non-violent personality is a rhetorical device all in itself. It makes him look far more approachable to the receiver of the letter. One example starts on line 64, Ghandi states, “If you think that there is any substance in my letter, and if you will care to discuss matters with me, and if to that end you would like me to postpone publication of this letter, I shall gladly refrain on receipt of a telegram to that effect soon after this reaches you.” Ghandhi doesn’t threaten the British government instead he offers to not publish the letter so that they can sit down and have a civil talk about it. On top of that, he had the letter hand-delivered by an English friend. He is unquestionbly far more civil than the Americans were about their Declaration of Independence.

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I am unsure about what you ment by the one and two part but I fixed a few words and tried to make it run smoother. I hope it helps!

well they should not copy somethen in the first place

light-year  

the distance that light travels in a vacuum in one year, equal to about 9.46 trillion km (5.88 trillion mi). light-years are used in measuring interstellar and intergalactic distances.  

parsec  

a unit of distance used in astronomy, equal to about 3.25 light years (3.08 × 1016 meters).  

parallax  

the apparent angular displacement of a celestial body due to its being observed from the surface instead of from the center of the earth (diurnal parallax or geocentric parallax) or due to its being observed from the earth instead of from the sun (annual parallax or heliocentric parallax)  

absolute magnitude  

the magnitude (brightness) of a celestial object as it would be seen at a standard distance of 10 parsecs.  

apparent magnitude  

the magnitude of a celestial object as it is actually measured from the earth.  

redshift  

an increase in the wavelength of radiation emitted by a celestial body as a consequence of the doppler effect.  

the great thing about your imagination is that it doesn't have to make sense! if i were you i would be stuck in space, no communication with earth travelling around and around, you can only guess how long its been since your communication broke down. you land on an undiscovered planet, you do a scientific investigation examining the elements and conditions. you come across alien lifeforms.  

best of luck!