What should i add to this if i'm making this suit?

the type of cloth that will be easy to work with and breathe in , and maybe eyes that you can look out of like maybe like tennis shoes holes so you can look out

Its a nice start. You should add some hair to the top of their head to give it some character. Try making the tail extra fluffy and making the eyes big so you can see better ( also makes them look cuter)

Love the fursuit idea! Good luck :D

where is the excerpt?