-- writing a song. any advice? -- (distorted)
Killin me with the lies
You've told me
Here and There
I see you with the others.

(rap)
You can't deny, i got the screenshots from Instagram.
got calls from the others too.
"i with your man!" "i'm with your man!''

Stop your dam lyin and tell me the truth
cuz' when you mess with a real girl,
you gonna get

First off, this is really good! And as for advice, if you want, you could also add "Tell me the truth even if it hurts, it's better than lying" (I don't know much but I hope this helps)

firrreee

Explanation:

---smoked!

oh you think that its a joke?

just you wait until you find

when you get yourself in a  bind,

that I won't be there to help you

its the hand that i just dealt you

u idk what else.

but your lyrics are firreee

keep on writing!

nope! and if it is, i'd rather not know lol