I write poems and need some opinions on my recent one!! my lover is a woman
while that may not seem wrong
it is when i am a woman as well
its shun upon by everyone else
we're called slurs that cut like swords

my lover is a woman
a woman of great knowledge
at such a fruitful age
for she's been through more
had more hate
more eyes looking down on her

my lover is a woman
while that might upset some
and while it might make some look away
the love i have for this woman
can never go away
by tito a.