Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise and copy this paragraph into a new document. Review your paragraph and make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write one short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing.
You will submit:
The original draft of your body paragraph
The revised draft of the same paragraph
A short paragraph describing how your revisions improved your writing

Paragraph:
First, article one, Defeating Dragons, talks about teens who save people from fire. For an example the text states, “Slayers set up hoses that eventually put out the blaze, saving the structure.” The second article talks about this girl and her friends, saving the environment. The text states,“They explained that using biodiesel in school busses would be less expensive than regular fuel.” That tells you how this girl and her friends can save the environment by using biodiesel. Both of the articles compare both helpers saving people and their environment. Now that you know the similarities, you can read on to find the differences.

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Explanation:

       First, article one, Defeating Dragons, talks about teens who save people from fire. For example, “Slayers set up hoses that eventually put out the blaze, saving the structure.” (Put commentary here). Next, the second article, (name of the article) discusses (what are the names of the people?) this girl and her friends saving the environment. The text states, “They explained that using biodiesel in school busses would be less expensive than regular fuel.”  The quote says that the girl and her friends can save the environment by using biodiesel. (Give more commentary). Both of the articles compare helpers protecting people and their environment. It connects how the Slayers put out the fire and the (people) using biodiesel.                                              

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Explanation

    First, article one, Defeating Dragons, talks about teens who save people from fire. For example, “Slayers set up hoses that eventually put out the blaze, saving the structure.”  Food that Fuels ,discusses  this girl (her name is Cassandra) and her friends saving the environment. The text states, “They explained that using biodiesel in school busses would be less expensive than regular fuel.”  The quote says that the girl and her friends can save the environment by using biodiesel.  Both of the articles compare helpers protecting people and their environment. It connects how the Slayers put out the fire and the people using biodiesel.

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