Read the paragraph. (1) We went to the Museum of Natural Science to see the new gem exhibit. (2) The display included and showed minerals from all over the world. (3) The most impressive part of the show was the extensive display of diamonds and other precious stones.
Which revision makes one of the sentences more concise?
A. Sentence 1: Delete the word “gem.”
B. Sentence 2: Delete the phrase “and showed.”
C. Sentence 3: Change “impressive” to “interesting.”
D. Sentence 3: Change “show” to “exhibit.”

satin. 

"very shiny satin may look great in the fabric store or in the sewing room, but once onstage it can look fake and cheap as it reflects the light from the fixtures."

it's all focused on the way you angle and put all of these this in pespective. say you wanted you artwork to be famous, you would want to align and put all of these into grasp. the imagery give off a good descriptive matter. proportion is aligned with the color and mood. balance is how you place everything and if there is too much or too little of. design is the main thing if you want your art to be amazing

virtual smiles! : )

~mqddie