What should you check for as you revise your draft?

So revision is a chance for you to look critically at what you have written to see:

Explanation:

1. if it's really worth saying,

2. if it says what you wanted to say, and.

3. if a reader will understand what you're saying.

put it aside and take a break the take it back and Proofread It with a new mind

Explanation:

        i think it is referred as the 8th wonder of the world because each of the terra cotta warriors was not the same. they each had many things with their physical stature, like different height, armor, and different characteristics, which were all different. what makes it interesting is that there were 8,000 soldiers in that tomb. so making that many soldiers for the emperor meant a-lot to the emperor. it means that their is strength in numbers now matter how different.

hope it : p