Here's what I have so far in my book. What do you think and what else should I add??

this is actually pretty good so far, i dont think you need to add anything else

Explanation:

the german artist, architect, and designer, peter behrens

paul mccartney, john lennon, george harrison, and ringo starr are the members of the beatles an american band from liverpool that was formed in 1960. it is writing songs and performing their own music are the reasons that influenced many american rock artists and groups. their group was the perfect role model for the youth during their time.