Hi i wnts u guys opinion , i've been working on a song called the monster inside of me and i wnt to know how is it so far

why did u left me how could u hurt me like this
and i'm scared to show the world who i really am inside
i get a secaret that no one know that theres a monster inside of me
and i'm screaming out for help but there's no one around me
won't someone come and save me form this misery
cause the pain that i have inside of me is killing each day that passes by
and the memories that we mad is fading away
won't someone come and rescue me from the monster that i have inside of me
plz let me know how does it sound so far