So i wrote a song i think its good but ion know what do you think Its a indies pop punk type beat
https://www. y outube. com/watch?v=a-gOvYX85bs
PRESSURE

Bloodshed on your door and you let me in
Choirs singing where poor
I sing in your praise and I look the other way
Will you let me stay
Babies cryin its craz in the month of may
My wrist is spilit as I fade

Bloodshed on your door and you let me in
Choirs singing where poor
I sing in your praise and I look the other way
Will you let me stay
Daises bloom in the fields
My world is so upheaped
Blood is gushing away
People screaming all the time I can't see where its kind
Someone please rid me of this life
I don't wanna be alone
This world is so so cold
Make it feel so real
Babies cryin its craz in the month of may
My wrist is spilt as I fade