Dave and his team are creating a proposal to recommend to their supervisor that the company's database should be redesigned.
"the proposed developer employed only certified programmers. over the past five years, they have redesigned more than 50 databases for local businesses. they will add innovative new functionality to our system, while increasing the efficiency of our current system's capabilities."
which of the following options best improves the section of dave's text excerpted above?
a) replacing "employed" in the first sentence with "employs"
b) a proposal asking your supervisor to implement a new initiative
c) active voice rather than passive voice