Fast 25 points if done correctly. write an inductive paragraph. check to see that all the sentences lead up to the point made in your concluding topic sentence.

An inductive paragraph is a collection of sentences that, through some kind of reasoning or proof, lead you to a conclusion.try with this: cinderella was a very good humoured, loving and positive girl and used this qualities to overcome the difficulties of her life and reach happiness.at an early age she lost her mother but to her good heart and the love for her father managed to stay happy and avoid sadness.when her father married again her good hearth and positive attitude put his happiness before everything even knowing the bad attitude of her step-mother towards her.when her father died too, she didn't allow herself to despair and instead used the heavy chores imposed on her by her evil step-mother and her good humour to fill her life with new meaning and happiness.we can see that the qualities that made cinderella overcome her sad situation led her, at the end, to happiness and fulfillment marring the prince and becoming a princess. let me know if you need anymore : )

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

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