Can someone plz give me feedback on this poem, tell me if you like it and how i can make it better: burnt tears when that new life was brought down, wrapped into a present, you did not even give it a chance to see it, you ignored it. as she grew you taught her whatever you desired, from her language to her clothes. when she was 7, she was spotted by a predator and became his prey, you saw her tears, yet you did not take a chance to ask “what wrong child.” everyday you gave your love to your boys, and kept her exiled when she was 9, she insisted on not going to school, so you grabbed her by her roots and threw her out the place you call “home” she turned 10, and taught herself modesty and you did not even give her support nor even smile she had big dreams that were killed by no one else but you, because at 15 you grabbed her hand and threw it into another man’s hand and locked them with chains, even though she told you she did not want him, but you were blinded by your pride, honour and respect. so she made the biggest decision of her life, to end it, to remove the burden of her that was on you to forever burn those tears, and her soul now whispers into your ear, “are you happy now, father? ”

The arctic national wildlife refuge is home to caribou, moose, musk oxen, wolves, foxes, grizzlies, polar bears and migratory birds. leaders in the oil industry believe the refuge is the perfect site for the “environmentally sensitive exploration” of oil. environmentalists are wondering: what will become of the wildlife? president george w. bush, oil-industry leaders and others believe that americans will benefit from the oil that lies under the snow-filled surface of the refuge. in their opinion, the oil will reduce high fuel prices and decrease our need for oil from other countries. i believe the cost of such drilling is too high. i agree with environmentalists who fear that drilling will disturb the migration of more than 130,000 caribou. each spring, the caribou travel 400 miles to give birth on the coastal plain. in this area of the refuge, there are fewer predators. in addition, experts say that the oil in the area adds up to less than a six-month supply. is such a small amount of oil worth the risk drilling poses to these animals? americans are the largest consumers of oil. instead of drilling for oil, we should decrease our need for foreign oil simply by using less. we must all work together to cut back on the oil we use in order to preserve the wildlife of the arctic national wildlife refuge. what type of argument is used in this paragraph? i believe the cost of such drilling is too high. i agree with environmentalists who fear that drilling will disturb the migration of more than 130,000 caribou. each spring, the caribou travel 400 miles to give birth on the coastal plain. in this area of the refuge, there are fewer predators. in addition, experts say that the oil in the area adds up to less than a six-month supply. is such a small amount of oil worth the risk drilling poses to these animals? a. appeal to emotion c. appeal to logic b. bandwagon d. none of the above select the best answer from the choices provided a b c d