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What is the best way to improve the conclusion? add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writer’s topic. add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences. revise the final sentence to have a different tone. revise the first sentence to state a future goal.

Ihad just taken a heavy lunch and i was taking à nap in a shade. i was alone left to take care of our home. i was awoken by à touch on m'y face and

Weakened further by dysentery the farther could not get out of his bunk what further injury did some of the inmates do him