Is this a good thesis "money dosent buy happiness and there are many ways to find joy without it." if is not can you give me an example the theme is finding happiness

What is wrong with the sentence. the car is packed, we're already to go, and the weather is looking beautiful.

Essay about how to keep environment clean and safe?

In the story “seventh grade,” victor’s and michael’s hopes and expectations about girls often cause them to a.act in embarrassing ways. b.get into trouble at school. c.struggle with friendships. d.do poorly in their classes.