Hi! you will choose 1 paragraph from my essay under that paragraph you will retype the whole thing and make it better by adding in adjectives, or using better verbs and correct any mistakes. under that you will type up a new paragraph telling about the changes you made: -) 100 points need asap the jellyfish population is taking over the ocean, jellyfish lay up to 40,000 which causes less fish for fishermen. fishermen and other fish, jellyfish are causing fishermen to get less fish get stung. making candy out of jelly jellyfish, schools are starting to make candy out of jellyfish and sell it for money. so, they can buy new nets for the fishermen. why did they not talk about getting bad stings from jellyfish? to begin, the number of mnemiopsis (knee-me-opsis) jellyfish blooms are leaving fisherman without fish, causing them to lose millions. in fact, they can hatch some 40,000 eggs daily. these blooms eat the larvae and eggs of fish that fisherman, especially local ones of the black sea, depend on, resulting in the loss of money. clearly, the problem is growing at a rapid rate. meanwhile, the jellyfish swarms are affecting fisheries, but the problem is also spreading to power plants. these plants are in japan, israel, and scotland. plankton ecologist steve hay says, "science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of jellyfish.” when the swarms clog the power plants, the people lose electricity which creates many upset citizens. with so many people affected, there needs to be some solutions. today, there is an unlikely hero in the black sea. a different species of jellyfish called the bereo jellyfish found its way into the black sea. this species eats the mnemiopsis jellyfish. the bereo are creating a more balanced ecosystem. although this has saved the black sea, scientists are wary about using the bereo in other seas. “we are thinking about using the bereo in other areas, but we are concerned. there is a real fear of negative ecological consequences from introducing new species.

The jellyfish population is conquering the ocean. Jellyfish can lay up to 40,000 which causes fish populations to decrease, which means less fish for fishermen. Jellyfish are causing fishermen to capture less fish get stung. Schools are beginning to make candy out of jellyfish and sell it for money, so they can buy new nets for the fishermen. Why did they not talk about getting painful stings from the jellyfish?

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explanation:

mrs. mallard has a heart condition, which means that if she's startled she could die. so, when news comes that her husband's been killed in an accident, the people who tell her have to cushion the blow.

mrs. mallard's sister josephine sits down with her and dances around the truth until mrs. mallard finally understands what happened. the deceased mr. mallard's friend, richards, hangs out with them for moral support.

richards originally found out because he had been in the newspaper headquarters when a report of the accident that killed mr. mallard, which happened on a train, came through. richards waited for proof from a second source before going to the mallards' to share the news.

when mrs. mallard finds out what happened she acts differently from most women in the same position, who might disbelieve it. she cries passionately before deciding to go to her room to be by herself.

in her room, mrs. mallard sits down on a comfy chair and feels completely depleted. she looks out the window and looks out at a world that seems alive and fresh. she can see the sky coming between the rain clouds.

mrs. mallard sits still, occasionally crying briefly like a kid might.

the narrator describes her as youthful and pretty, but because of this news she looks preoccupied and absent.

she seems to be holding out for some kind of unknown news or knowledge, which she can tell is approaching.

mrs. mallard breathes heavily and tries to resist before succumbing to this unknown thing, which is a feeling of freedom.

acknowledging freedom makes her revive, and she doesn't consider whether she should feel bad about it.

mrs. mallard thinks to herself about how she'll cry when she sees her husband's dead body and how much he loved her. even so, she's kind of excited about the chance to make her own decisions and not feel accountable to anyone.

mrs. mallard feels even more swept up by the idea of freedom than the fact that she had felt love for her husband.

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