Can someone meke this paragraph sound people’s health is a very important topic today, the soda ban has many people fight against obesity. however, citizens don’t want their government telling them what to eat or do, they want to have freedom. that’s the reason people should start a better diet by themselves, as their own choice.

People’s health is a widely popular topic today. The soda ban has helped many people fight against obesity. However, citizens don’t want their government repromanding and ridiculing what they decide to eat or do, they just want to have freedom to make their own choices. This is a major reason why people should start eating heathier and excersizing a little more.

he is. some of his decisions were very irresponsible and did lead to the death of both romeo and juliet, such as him marrying them too quick or him not clarifying romeo's plan with him.

basically he did not think things through well enough or at all.

hope this

you should ask "yourself is it good enough? "