Hey, i'm not that good at writing and i was wondering if someone could edit my thesis statement. my prompt is what makes a hero. and down below this is what i have. it can only be one sentence but semi colons can be used . me make it the best it can be. a hero is someone that has been able to make the most substantual impact on a persons life; a hero is someone who is strong through all times, not someone who would give up at the first sight of difficulty.