Which of the following is not a step used to refine a thesis statement?

There are no answer choices provided but I could try and help you by staying what would be a step used to refine a thesis statement:

•make sure that your thesis statement states the topic of what you are writing
•clarify vague phrases so that you are basically spoon-feeding people what you are writing about.
•make sure you reread your thesis and make sure your audience can clearly make out what your essay is about.

It's about a overweight ogre and another female ogre. there is also a donkey and cat in boots for some reason.