English, 08.07.2019 07:30 Nicoleebel2984

Read the sentence. i love reading travel books because they include beautiful pictures of faraway places and they motivate me to explore the world. how should this sentence be revised?

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Answer from: ericlawton

It is a run-on sentence and can be changed in many ways, adding commas, ;, and breaking it up into two

Answer from: samone26

Correct answer is I love reading travel books because they include beautiful pictures of faraway places, and they motivate me to explore the world

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Answer from: charlie3051

I love reading travel books because they include beautiful pictures of faraway places, and they motivate me to explore the world.

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Before the revision is made it is unclear whether the travel books or the beautiful pictures motivate the writer to explore the world. Because of this, it is best to but the comma after "places" and before "and." This makes it clear that the travel books motivate the writer to explore the world. The placement of the comma is incorrect in all of the other choices.

Answer from: jaelynnm

This sentence should be revised as it show in option (C) (C)I love reading travel books because they include beautiful pictures of faraway places, and they motivate me to explore the world.

The sentence is a long sentence and the comma separates the information making a small pause, that makes it clearer. Also used when adding information

Answer from: djub

C- I love reading travel books because they include beautiful pictures of faraway places, and they motivate me to explore the world.

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