30pts which detail from the story best develops the theme that trust is only possible with understanding? “'i know he sold your guitar, but you told me yourself he just wants what’s best for you,' michelle said, while philip and the caregiver looked on in amazement as erkan settled into an armchair.'" "michelle rushed out of the store room and down the hall to erkan’s room." “'he can’t have them, michelle. i sold them at the corner,' erkan shouted, pushing his way to michelle." “michelle was scanning boxes of gauze bandages and stacking them onto a shelf in the storeroom when the caregiver came in and announced, 'phillip’s trying to get erkan to take a shower and he needs your .'”

“'I know he sold your guitar, but you told me yourself he just wants what’s best for you,' Michelle said, while Philip and the caregiver looked on in amazement as Erkan settled into an armchair.'"

i just took it and got it right

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.