Ireally need ! i have started my essay which defends the passage. i have a couple points but i don’t think they are strong enough. if you were to write this what are some things you’d add or state in agreement?me, you don’t need to write the essay just give me a couple points to better my essay.

what gradee ya in so we can do it im 8th grade

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well stockyards mean a large yard containing pens and sheds, typically adjacent to a slaughterhouse, in which livestock is kept and sorted. and i'm assuming that by party you   mean a large group of people which does make sense because chicago is a very crowded place much like new york. stockyards tend to take up a lot of room due to needing the area for pens to keep animals in and the fact that stockyards are usually right by slaughterhouse where they process and distribute the product. so its much like a zoo but with some dead animal products close by.