What is the problem with the following sentence? dickens was a very popular novelist, but he had to set a grueling schedule for himself in order to meet his public's demands, for many of his novels were serialized, so he had to publish a new installment every week. a. the sentence uses excessive subordination. b. the sentence uses excessive coordination. c. the sentence uses excessive slang. d. the sentence does not have enough independent clauses what is the problem with the following sentence? dickens was a very popular novelist, but he had to set a grueling schedule for himself in order to meet his public's demands, for many of his novels were serialized, so he had to publish a new installment every week. a. the sentence uses excessive subordination. b. the sentence uses excessive coordination. c. the sentence uses excessive slang. d. the sentence does not have enough independent clauses

the answer would be D

because:

i couldn't find any examples of coordination in the sentance, so if there isnt any then there deffinatly isnt an excessive ammount.

I wouldnt say that there is an excessive ammount of subordination.

If the sentace has any slang ,it definatly doesnt have exessive slang

i would say that there arent enough independant clauses because the sentance is ok untill you get to te part where they add "for many of his novels were serialized". you sould be able to read the sentance without what is in the commas and it would make sence. but "...in order to meet his public's damands so he had to publish a new installment every week" doesnt make much sense at all.

i think this is right. but sorry if its not im jst in middle school and this is what i belive what it is

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