Ireally like banana splits. they are always so delicious. i buy one every sunday. if you're hungry, try one! my sister likes caramel sundaes. but banana splits are best. that is just my opinion. mark needs to revise this paragraph because a) he believes that banana splits are better than caramel sundaes. b) he uses an extremely difficult vocabulary. eliminate c) he has many different grammatical and spelling errors. d) his sentences have no variety in length.