Write a concluding paragraph for your outline. rewrite your thesis statement for you concluding statement. make it short and simple here my outline illegal immigration: the cause of overpopulation in the united states what attracts the citizens of other countries to migrate to the u. s.? whether it is the stable economy, the safe environment or the lifestyle, the overpopulation problem creates a problem in the population capacity of the country. the problems that overpopulation carry is an increase of energy usage, urban crowing, decline in water availability, agriculture interruptions due to suburban development and a direct effect in nature and species. how is our economy affected? lack of education and poor human resources tend to bring a number of issues, like crime, poverty and less job opportunities. contrary to what it is believed, the growing of population does not mean that demand will actually grow faster than supply. here is my introduction and thesis statement the united states is thought to be the country of opportunities; no wonder it is one of the main targets for most people who think of migrating to another country. it is widely recognized that the united states in an overpopulated country. over-population causes many social problems such as lack of public services and poor education. however, it is important to discuss the problems that arise from overpopulation.

My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-[they will say: "but how his arms and legs are thin! "]do i daredisturb the universe? in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.which lines indicate that the speaker is concerned about what others think of him? my morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,my necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.o with a bald spot in the middle of my hair[they will say: "how his hair is growing thin! "]and indeed there will be timeto wonder, "do i dare? " and, "do i dare? "

My dog sleeps beside my bed he wakes me up in the middle of the night to let him out. complete, run-on sentence or comma splice

Read the excerpt from act 1 of a doll's house. helmer: nora! [goes up to her and takes her playfully by the ear.] the same little featherhead! suppose, now, that i borrowed fifty pounds today, and you spent it all in the christmas week, and then on new year's eve a slate fell on my head and killed me, and— nora: [putting her hands over his mouth]. oh! don't say such horrid things. helmer: still, suppose that happened, —what then? nora: if that were to happen, i don't suppose i should care whether i owed money or not. helmer: yes, but what about the people who had lent it? nora: they? who would bother about them? i should not know who they were. helmer: that is like a woman! but seriously, nora, you know what i think about that. no debt, no borrowing. there can be no freedom or beauty about a home life that depends on borrowing and debt. we two have kept bravely on the straight road so far, and we will go on the same way for the short time longer that there need be any struggle. nora: [moving towards the stove]. as you , torvald. how does the interaction between helmer and nora advance the plot? nora realizes that helmer will completely disapprove of her having borrowed money, so she has to continue to keep it a secret from him. nora realizes that she and helmer have the same ideas about financial issues, and the conversation brings them closer together later in the play. helmer realizes that nora is more responsible with money than he originally thought, and he trusts her more with finances later in the play. nora realizes that helmer knows a lot more about borrowing and lending, and she will seek his input later when she needs it.