Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. which two sections of his review contain constructive feedback?

As there wasn't any choices, research was done.

I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to.

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Two sentences are:

1. However, I though the section with the pie-eating contest wasn't very interesting. It just made me want to stop reading the essay.

2. I would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same word many times in the essay. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you to.

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16.) true

17.) true

18.) no information in the text

19.) false

20.) no information in the text

i am a strong (insert gender here) my father and his brother were to, they were killed not by the cold, not by the bears or wolves that roam our streets at night, but by the   bolsheviks. we must stand up and fight communism or we all end up dead, starved dehydrated, enslaved. the time is now we must fight. lenin is a dangerous man but he can be stopped. so my comrades we shall siege there weapons tonight on ward. (rides away with ak(not invented yet) and sword in hand while on bear into snowstorm)