In which passage is it clearest that the author is using dictation to achieve some kind of effect? a. the little girl sat in the corner with her blanket, crying. b. the student sat holding his pencil. staring at the test before him. c. the boy walked slowly through the graveyard, scared of every small sound. d. the bride floated down the aisle to her awaiting love.

kellan is struggling with the amount of work he has to do

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the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."