Which example from a visit of charity speeds up the pacing of the story and makes the reader feel as if the action is happening quickly ?

"Marian jumped up and moved toward the door. For the second time, the claw almost touched her hair, but it was not quick enough. The little girl put her cap on."

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Abruptly Marian saw a hand, snappy as a winged animal hook, reach uncertain and cull the white top off her head. In the meantime, another hook to coordinate drew her everything the route into the room.  

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