Can someone revise this and make corrections to it im giving 30 point who does it effect and why does it affect us? it affects us because it is deadly. they are very unsafe creatures and are very fatal to us. so next time you think about touching a jellyfish think twice because you do not want to get hurt or die.

Read this excerpt from we’ve got a job: the 1963 children’s march. then, in 1958, when he was nine, his mother got a job as a dental assistant – and a raise. at about the same time, wash got a job, too. six days a week for eight years, he woke up by four o'clock in the morning to deliver milk. by the time he got to school each day, he'd already put in almost half a day's work. how does this excerpt readers make a personal connection to the story? by connecting readers to his mother’s medical training by connecting readers to the milk-delivery business by connecting readers to wash’s academic success by connecting readers to wash’s daily work routine