Read the passage below, looking for the following 10 mistakes…rewrite the paragraph, making the necessary revisions so that the paragraph has correct grammar. 2 fragments, 2 comma splices, 2 missing apostrophes, 1 missing comma, 1 missing word, 1 homonym mistake, and 1 verb mistake: on tv, people who sleepwalk generally act like zombies, they stagger along with their arms held stiffly in front of them. in fact (as you know if youve ever seen one), most sleepwalkers walk around quite normally. they may even perform routine tasks. such as getting dressed or brushing their teeth. sometimes they talk, although there conversation may not make a lot of sense. sleepwalking is fairly common behavior. especially among children. it occurs during periods of very deep sleep. in most cases, a person sleepwalks just a few times, then the sleepwalking stops forever. if sleepwalking becomes a frequent problem the sleepwalker may need a doctor . what should you do if you see someone sleepwalking? leading the sleepwalker back bed is usually all that is necessary. but if the sleepwalker be in danger of injury, gently wake him or her up.

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On TV, people who sleepwalk generally act like zombies. They stagger along with their arms held stiffly in front of them. In fact, if you’ve ever seen one before, most sleepwalkers walk around quite normally. They may even perform routine tasks such as getting dressed or brushing their teeth. They can even talk sometimes! Although their conversation may not make sense, sleepwalking is a fairly common behavior; especially among children. It occurs during periods of very deep sleep. In most cases, a person will only sleepwalk for a few times in their life and then never do it again. If sleepwalking becomes a frequent problem, the sleepwalker may need a doctor’s help. What should you do if you see someone sleepwalking? Leading the sleepwalker back to bed is usually all that is necessary, but if the sleepwalker were to be in danger of injury, gently wake him or her up.

many battles and wars (such as the one at gettysburg), are commemorated by statues or monuments, with some areas preserved as monuments and national parks. do you think this contradicts the message of "grass"? in at least 200 words, explain your thinking and cite evidence from the poem to support your opinion.