Rewrite the following paragraph, adding conjunctions as necessary to make it less choppy. in world war ii, german submarines were called u-boats. they sank many allied transports. they sank many allied freighters. the allies worked on breaking the u-boat radio code. they weren’t successful. in 1942, british commandos captured a u-boat. it was wrecked. it was abandoned. the commandos got a german code machine from it. it was called an enigma machine. the allies broke the enigma code. now the allies were able to locate german u-boats. many of them were destroyed.

In World War II, German submarines were called U-boats which sank many Allied transports and freighters. The Allies worked on breaking the U-boat radio code but weren’t successful. In 1942, British commandos captured a wrecked  and abandoned U-boat.The commandos got a German code machine from it called an Enigma machine. The Allies broke the code, and were able to locate German U-boats which were scarce.

In World War II, German submarines were called U-boats. They sank many Allied transports as well as many Allied freighters. And, although the Allies worked on breaking the U-boat radio code, they weren’t successful. However, in 1942, British commandos captured a U-boat, which after being wrecked, and abandoned, the commandos got a German code machine from it, which was called an Enigma machine. Afterward, The Allies broke the Enigma code, and now the Allies were able to locate German U-boats; consequently, many of them were destroyed.

Conjunctions are words that join other words, phrases or sentences together so there can be a smoother transition from one idea or word to the other. There are three types: Coordinating conjunctions that link equal parts of a sentence (and, nor, so, as well as), Subordinating Conjunctions that link a dependent clause to an independent clause (because, since, after) and Correlative Conjunctions that are pairs of conjunctions that join together words or phrases with equal importance within a sentence (either/or, such/that, not only/but also).

the support that the author, uses in the article facing our fears is a): a definition of the part of the brain called the amygdala.

he takes neuroscientist joseph ledoux's words by telling that by falling to distinguish between evolutionary old systems located in the amygdala and newer systems, centered in the prefrontal cortex, doctors have conflated non conscious threat circuits in the brain with circuits that underlie the conscious experience of fear. that, the author says, "leads ledoux to the jarring conclusion that the amygdala, a decades-old centerpiece of the brain's fear circuit, does not underlie the conscious feeling of fear".

despite this, the author points out in the article that that is a controversial notion and that evidence, in animal and humans, supports the idea that core emotions can exist outside of conscious awareness.