Iam writing an essay about my career and i need with perfecting my introduction. “the career i chose to present this year was photography. as most people know photographers are professionals that focus on the art of photography with a digital or film camera. photographers use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various people, places and things in different settings.” (hearting all)

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The career I chose to present this year was photography. As most people know, photographers are people / persons that excel and practice taking pictures, professionally or not. Photographers focus on the art of photography using a digital or film camera. Photographers tend to use artificial or natural lighting to snap pictures of various places, people, things and settings.

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Not all photographers are professional, and some people do not know that. I added in that photographers excel and practice taking pictures, professionally *or not.* I added some punctuation and spelling for you, I hope this helps.

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