Needing in english got a 30% on it her feedback hi mia, for working on this some more. i'm excited to see you develop your final draft! at this point in the essay, you should have 4 paragraphs: intro, 2 body, conclusion with your works cited. you should not be labeling sections anymore. it should be clear as your audience reads what is what in your paper. make sure you have also responded to the reflection questions in the assignment. i would still like for you to review the previous assignments and my feedback on them to make sure you are incorporating support from your research sources into both of your body paragraphs. remember that arguments rely on logos, and logos relies on research! make sure you thoroughly go through the editing checklist on page 3 of the lesson. this will you check for grammar issues. working through it step by step will be .

I think its good i dont think there is much major mistakes

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

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