What is the penalty for defying creon's decree?

How can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity

When trisha saw the boys on the stage she exclaimed finally a group of students who can act

Number the events to show the order in which they occur. use 1 for the first event. luma offers to meet jeremiah’s mom and drive jeremiah to and from practice. jeremiah tries out for the soccer team. jeremiah is not allowed to play soccer because his mother does not want him around strangers. jeremiah makes the team. jeremiah’s mother agrees to the plan.