Can you correct this paragraph? a football player once had a dream. the dream was about the queen of england. she was on a boat and was fishing. when she tried to put a worm on the fishing hook, her necklace fell into the water. a train conductor named maxwell threw popcorn in the water. the fish ate the popcorn then gave the queen her necklace. the queen said, ” you all for me get my necklace back! ” “you are welcome said the conductor and all the fish.

the way you did it is okay (not really the best) but it could use a little work.

explanation:

dreams can say a lot about the personalities,thoughts, feelings, and intentions of people, what exactly do dreams mean? are the dreams we have   a result of our thinking process or are they connected to our hidden desires? facts and fiction will be used to uncover the truth behind our dreams.

after the moon goes from a full moon it turns into a waning gibbous moon.

here's where my answer came from. i hope this .