Can someone me make my essay sound better?
"overall, the development of romeo throughout the play contributes to that even though everyone like love, no one realizes it’s a cause of consequences and violence by showing how he was depressed at the beginning of the play and how he was regretful about his decision fighting tybalt."
i can't think of a better way of stating the theme.
theme: even though everyone like love, no one realizes it’s a cause of consequences and violence

Btw everything that i edit it will be in all capitals

"Overall, the development of Romeo throughout the play contributes to that(WHAT IS THAT) even though everyone(USE ANOTHER WORD SUCH AS MANY OR A LARGE AMOUNT OF PEOPLE) like(USE ANOTHER WORD SUCH AS ENJOYS) love, no one realizes it’s a(THE NOT A) cause of consequences and violence by showing how he was depressed at the beginning of the play and how he was regretful about his decision fighting Tybalt."

I can't think of a better way of stating the theme.

Theme: even though everyone(LARGE AMOUNTS OF PEOPLE) like(ENJOY) love, no one realizes it’s a(THE) cause of consequences and violence

BESIDES MY EDITS THIS IS VERY GOOD..GOOD LUCK ON YOUR ESSAY:)

me before you gives us insight of life meaning in unique way. it answers question about what kind of life you want and people’s struggle to be in the ideal condition of worth living. the author, jojo moyes, was intrigued by the case of daniel james who persuaded to end his life after suffering for years.

it begins with louisa clark, a girl with boring life, lose her job at the café and start to stand on her feet by applying job as a private carer of disable man. the near location and the money they offer push her to come to the castle where the interview conducted. she was doubted by camilla traynor, a mother of quadriplegic man, with her inexperience but somehow, she is fully gain employed by camilla and her husband, steven traynor.

on the other hand, will traynor, the disable man louisa take care of, is not an easy man to catch. he has sharp comments with everything she has done and seems unreachable. as time passed by, will become more open to louisa and they start to communicate better. that is until will has his sister, georgina, visited.

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