English, 25.11.2019 12:31 haileybug0305

How can the author revise the passage to improve it?

hannah had a lot of things to do last week. hannah had to study for a math test. hannah had to go to a doctor's appointment. hannah had to buy a birthday present for her sister. hannah had to babysit for her baby cousin, too. hannah was busy but didn't want to miss out on her school activities, either. hannah had baseball practice on monday and a school play on tuesday.

do not repeat the name hannah so many times.

list fewer things that hannah has to do.

add more characters to the story.

rearrange the sentences in a clearer order.

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