Read the excerpt from hemingway’s a farewell to arms. “there is nothing worse than war.” “defeat is worse.” “i do not believe it,” passini said. . “what is defeat? you go home.” “they come after you. they take your home. they take your sisters.” “i don’t believe it,” passini said. “they can’t do that to everybody. let everybody defend his home. let them keep their sisters in the house.” this excerpt exemplifies how hemingway’s dialogues typically includes common language and vague pronouns to refer to complex ideas. complicated syntax and inflated vocabulary choices. colorful language and specific word choices to define complex ideas. difficult vocabulary and cultural references to elicit reader response.

Common language and vague pronouns to refer to complex ideas.

common language (all the words are very simple in the excerpt)

vague pronouns (they, you, their, them, everybody)

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

it depends on how u want ur relationship to go, if u want something serious or not.   if u are to go on a first date go to somewhere nice, comfortable, and fun. don't make it so romantic because u can make the other person uncomfortable. don't make moves so fast and keep things chill.never force the other person to do things they don't want to do.

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