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can you check and revise this to see anything that's wrong?

toni morrison wrote a short story of one such discussion that revolved around an african girl who wished to have blue eyes. she expanded the story into her debut novel, ‘the bluest eye’ in 1970.
her next novel ‘sula’ published in 1973 was about the friendship between two girls in a black neighborhood and how their friendship evolves and changes over time. another novel toni morrison wrote was “song of solomon” in 1977 she told of the life of macon “milkman” dead iii, an african american male. the book traces his life from birth to adulthood. this book was chosen for oprah winfrey’s popular book club. she was appointed to the albert

You should underline The Bluest Eye and other book titles instead of putting a quotation. Also, I think your last sentence is incomplete. You also need to put some commas in long sentences to prevent a run-on sentence.

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you used the passive voice incorrectly, and you missed the period at the end of the entire paragraph, and that is pretty much it, you did a really good job.

the sample answer on e2020

conflicting values are demonstrated between two different groups in animal farm. first, the farm animals value hard work. this is shown by them working late and working long hours at the request of the pigs. napoleon and the pigs, however, sleep late daily. furthermore, the animals value equality. this differs from the value of napoleon and the other pigs. instead of equality, they value only gaining power and maintaining their own privilege, which is demonstrated by their taking extra milk and sleeping in beds.

we should all just get dogs.