Easy! will give brainiest to who ever

can someone check my work? it’s in the picture above. check to make sure it has a:

rhyme scheme
figurative language
and at least one verb in the subjective mood.

also give it a title and feel free to give corrections.

pls give me brainiest i need it :(

Explanation: here is language errors which i identified. few i  did mentioned. i think you are writing a poem about the miseries your people suffered. i have changed the language but the essence remains the same. hope you like it as the brainiest. the poem goes as:

living in a  dangerous time

being Jew is a crime (a, is used for singular objects, and jew is itself not singular it represent a nation )

as the Nazis began to invade

Jews began to fade( Jew itself represent a religion so you do not write as what you have written in the original text)

camps were tortured and sounded with gun

loved ones were shot, who run for life

no hope, no life and no food

hopelessness prevailed, when the soldiers got out of their mind

war came to an end, Hitlers philosophy ruined many

Jews got freedom, yet the faithful survived

nightmares and horror remain, and losses can not be repaired

costs are high, money can't revive the perished one

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